In order to write a good introduction, you must first have
            some idea as to what you want to argue in your essay.  For me, the most important thing
            about the Incas at this time is that they were about to be conquered by a very few
            Spanish conquistadores.  I would want to explain why that was possible.  My essay and my
            introduction would focus on that topic.  My introduction would set out what I thought
            were the most important facts about the Incas that would explain why they would soon be
            conquered.
I would point out that the Incas had a vast
            empire that they gained through conquest.  I would point out that this made them have
            many enemies within their empire who were waiting for a chance to rebel.  I would point
            out that the Incas had no immunity to the diseases the Spaniards were introducing to
            South America.  I would further point out that the Incas did not have a set way of
            deciding who the next emperor would be when one died.  I would then put that together by
            saying that, just before the Spanish came, an epidemic killed many Incas, including the
            emperor.  A civil war followed to determine who would be the next emperor.  Then the
            Spaniards came.  Using other Indians who hated the Incas as help, they destroyed the
            Inca empire.
In this way, my introduction would briefly
            present the major factors that led to the fall of the Inca
            Empire.
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