In his speech “A Talk to Teachers,” James Baldwin uses
repetition and parallelism in the final paragraph in a number of different ways and with
a number of different effects. These include the
following:
- At one point, Balwin writes, “And on
the basis of the evidence – the moral and political evidence . . . .” Here the phrasing
emphasizes the key word “evidence” while also calling attention to, and emphasizing, the
two specific kinds of evidence Baldwin has in
mind. - Later, Baldwin uses the phrase “backward society” –
a phrase that echoes, and significantly modifies, his earlier reference to the single
word “society.” Here again, as in the first example, Baldwin uses not only repetition
but also modification and clarification. - The same methods
are used in the following phrase: “in this school, or any Negro
school.” - A bit later, Baldwin mentions “Negro children”
and then emphasizes the key word “children” once more before the sentence ends. Baldwin
never allows us to forget precisely what he is talking about. He carefully avoids
ambiguous pronouns, such as “they” or “them.” - Emphatic
repetition is used once more in the phrase “I would try to teach them - I would try to
make them know.” Baldwin teaches the teachers he is addressing by giving his prose a
force and rhythm it would lack if he did not rely as much as he does on repetition and
parallelism. By repeating phrases almost exactly but then changing one word (as he does
here) Baldwin gives both the original word and the new word extra emphasis, so that we
really notice them and pay attention. - At one point,
Baldwin uses the following list:
those streets, those houses, those dangers, those
agonies.
Lists are extremely
effective and economical ways of communicating information. They are often (as here)
highly rhythmic and are often organized in patterns of increasing complexity. Notice,
for example, how the nouns listed here change from a one single-syllable noun
(“streets”) to two double-syllable nouns, with the accent on each first syllable
(“houses,” “dangers”), to one
three-syllable noun (“agonies”). The list would not be
nearly as rhythmic if the order of these nouns had been
reversed.
In short, Baldwin uses parallelism and repetition
for purposes of emphasis and to demonstrate that he is in complete command of the
language he employs.
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